Being new to writing my style was a bit all over the place, random new lines and proper paragraphs being intermittent.
But after getting some helpful advice from other writers, (you know who you are, thanks a bunch!) I have got it more organised, I will be doing the same to all my other stories, I will say here when that takes place as well as on the description of the story itself.

Hope you like the improvements and enjoy anything new I come up with in the future!

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